Malia and I made a slideshow about New Brighton for our home learning. Please leave comments and tell us what you think about our slideshow and what we should change so it's better next time!
Hi Joy, I really enjoyed your blog post about New Brighton and all the pictures you used especially the Pier at night. Next time when you make a slideshow you could make it a bit longer so we get some more facts. Apart from that it was really good. I have walked on the Pier at night have you?
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Hi Joy,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your blog post about New Brighton and all the pictures you used especially the Pier at night. Next time when you make a slideshow you could make it a bit longer so we get some more facts. Apart from that it was really good. I have walked on the Pier at night have you?