WANTED
I've heard of a WANTED brother apparently he had deep, teal, darling eyes, along with dark, beaming chocolate 🍫 Coloured hair with a strong stubbly chin, long , launch, lusies legs and monstrous, stick out monkey ears. His nose is as long as his stretched out finger, my guess is Ita about 15cm long. He is wearing a long sleeve top with a blue vest over the top, with deep, dark, teal, denim jeans, and wearing creamy brown leather boots. He is as skinny as a twig and as tall as a giraffe. He has a greedy, needy way of things. If you see him please tell someone and report immediately.
Good job joy I love ❤️ the punctuation well done ✅ good 😊 job xoxo 😘
ReplyDeletethanks, I really need the support.🙂
DeleteThis is excellent work Joy, you have really used lots of descriptive language to describe your character. Nice commenting as well Katie, thank you for making your comment specific.
ReplyDeleteHi Joy My name is Dion from St.Bernadette's and I'm a year 6. I really liked how you used lots of descriptive words to describe the wanted person. I also liked your chocolate picture 🍫. Maybe next time check your spelling because you spelled colour wrong and you spelled it (coulor). But I really liked your punctuation. I looking forward to seeing more work from you.
ReplyDeleteHI Joy, this is Tama from St. Bernadette's school and I am a Year 6 sstudent. I like the detail that you have done and made it flow. Next time you can check your spelling mistakes and proofread your work. I am looking forward to seeing your next presentation.
ReplyDeleteWell done Joy this is a great story I love the discriptive language.
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